Ancestral curses lifting
Spiritual forces gifting
False twin was funhouse mirror
Distortions made things clearer
Wrong label I assigned
kept me trapped in a bind
Dream rooster helped me see
new thoughts would set me free
The game I couldn’t win
was foolish to begin
Now karmic debts are paid
and battle scars will fade
With no regrets I pray
he’ll see the truth someday
The wheel of evolution
will free souls from confusion
To elevate and rise
must see through spirit’s eyes
Choosing authenticity
is the path to mastery
The emperor now appears
as past illusion clears
A match of mirrored fire
to build a new empire
Wherever this is going
surrender to life’s flowing
With trust in grand design
all fated paths align
Not labeling this flame
A rose by any name
is lovely to behold
more valuable than gold
New game by lovers’ rules
Forgiveness for the fools
Enjoying real relating
as vibe is elevating
Remember love’s a choice
Recapturing my voice
Our words carry much power
can cause a crumbling tower
or make desires real
combined with how we feel
As truth flows freely through
our dreams are coming true

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March 18, 2022 at 3:44 pm
SoundEagle 🦅ೋღஜஇ
Dear Melissa,
May you live happily and thrive meaningfully in the Flame of Love!
I am very impressed and really like your rhyming poetry, in which you have excelled. Personally, I do prefer a poem to rhyme all the way or to rhyme consistently, unless there are compelling or specific reasons not to do so. Since I have been composing mainly rhyming poems, often with end rhymes, internal rhymes, alliterations, assonances, consonances, sibilances as well as rhythmic devices, syllabic schemes, musical patterns, and other subtle or overt features, I naturally notice and gravitate to such features. Hence, I have many good reasons to like your poems, including this one entitled “The flame game“.
Moreover, there is a fair amount of maturity of thoughts in your posts, including this one.
I shall reciprocate graphically and poetically in response to this particular post featuring your rhyming poem entitled “The flame game” as follows:
I look forward to reading more of your posts and to your visiting my posts and pages. I would like to inform you that when you visit my blog, it is preferrable to use a desktop or laptop computer with a large screen to view the rich multimedia contents available for heightening your multisensory enjoyment at my blog, which could be too powerful and feature-rich for iPad, iPhone, tablet or other portable devices to handle properly or adequately.
Furthermore, since my intricate blog contains advanced styling and multimedia components plus animations, it is advisable to avoid viewing the contents of my blog using the WordPress Reader, which cannot show many of the advanced features and animations in my posts and pages. It is best to read the posts and pages directly in my blog so that you will be able to savour and relish all of the refined and glorious details plus animations, given that my blog contains not just texts and images but also bespoke stylings and dynamic animations — images and stories that are animated on their own. These are not videos but actual animations. You will realize very soon that my blog is unlike any other that you have ever visited.
May you find 2022 very much to your liking and highly conducive to your writing, reading, thinking and blogging whatever topics that take your intellectual fantasy and creative reverie in all their depths, diversity and profundity!
Take care and prosper!
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
March 18, 2022 at 6:22 pm
Melissa G
Wow, SoundEagle, high praise. Thank you! I’m equally impressed with your multidimensional, magical and thoughtfully crafted creations and appreciate you taking the time to provide so much positive feedback and encouragement. I agree about poetic form and rhymes. I find it’s a helpful mechanism to rein in and focus my thoughts and hopefully transmit helpful ideas in a relatable way. Coincidentally, the day I took the sunset post featured here, earlier this week, there was a sea turtle swimming nearby. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry and artwork. 2022 feels like a portal into a new and better way of inspired living. I wish you much joy and creativity and look forward to immersing myself in your multisensory experiences. Aloha! 🥰❤️🐢🦅✨
March 18, 2022 at 10:43 pm
SoundEagle 🦅ೋღஜஇ
Dear Melissa,
You are very welcome! My newest post contains many brand-new features that may greatly captivate you in various ways. The post is entitled “Romancing by the Beach and Sea with True Love and Reminiscence“. It is available at
https://soundeagle.wordpress.com/2022/02/14/romancing-by-the-beach-and-sea-with-true-love-and-reminiscence/
Please turn on your finest speakers or headphones, as the post will be playing music to you automatically.
The post contains two of my compositions entitled “Till Eternity” and “Lost In Love“.
Wishing you a productive weekend and a wonderful mid-March doing or enjoying whatever that satisfies you the most, whether aesthetically, physically, intellectually or spiritually!
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
March 19, 2022 at 4:58 am
Melissa G
Thank you! I remember seeing this when you first posted it, very beautiful and inspiring. I enjoyed revisiting it today because it resonates a lot more with what I’m currently experiencing. Thanks for the timely and synchronistic share. This is a special month for me, celebrating my daughter’s 9th birthday. Feels like we’re crossing over into an exciting new reality of dreams coming true. I hope it’s a wonderful and enjoyable, love-filled time for you too! 🌈❤️🦋
March 19, 2022 at 12:17 pm
SoundEagle 🦅ೋღஜஇ
Dear Melissa,
I am very delighted by your reply, and look forward to your submitting a comment to my said post entitled “Romancing by the Beach and Sea with True Love and Reminiscence” as a token of your visit, as I would love to have some feedback, given your interests, experience, expertise and wisdom. Moreover, you are welcome to copy and paste some or all of your previous reply as part of your forthcoming comment to be submitted to the comment section of my said post, to which your esteemed reply clearly pertains and also belongs. Please feel free to expand on your comment if you have additional matters to convey about the post and any salient aspects of its contents. Thank you in anticipation.
May you have a lovely weekend!
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
March 26, 2022 at 7:29 pm
Melissa G
I hope my admiration
causes joyful elevation
of your soul’s vibration
regardless of location ❤️
March 26, 2022 at 9:15 pm
SoundEagle 🦅ೋღஜஇ
Dear Melissa,
My invitation still stands, and it would indeed bring me great joy to be graced by your forthcoming comment(s) submitted in situ, where what you actually experienced about my said post happened, as others have rightly done so by submitting their feedback there. After all, I have enthusiastically submitted my substantial previous comments here, and it would be very odd or even amiss of me (and indeed anyone else for that matter) if I had composed those comments at one of my posts rather than here.
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
March 27, 2022 at 7:56 pm
Melissa G
If I’d initiated a conversation about my blog in your comments section,
the appropriateness of you responding there isn’t something I would question.
It would be odd and amiss and somewhat insincere
to cut and paste sentiments I’ve already shared here.
Please forgive me for my non-compliance
I hope it doesn’t sour our budding alliance.
March 28, 2022 at 1:07 pm
SoundEagle 🦅ೋღஜஇ
Dear Melissa,
I am somewhat taken aback by your response. As you can see from one of my previous comments, cutting/pasting is just one of the options available to you apart from composing a brand-new comment there at my said post, and is not at all “odd and amiss” let alone “insincere” to do so, not to mention that your sentiments and feedback regarding what you experienced at my post clearly pertain or belong to the subject matter(s) and presentation of my said post. If there is indeed a question or plausibility of being “insincere”, then it may be reflected or implied in your divulging being very positively impressed by my said post and yet only mentioning it elsewhere rather than expressing it in situ where it pertains and matters (even when opportunity and/or invitation continue to exist), as other commenters have done so at my said post.
I am effectively silenced by your response in this regard, and I would sooner take my leave than to continue any further.
All said, I am certain that you have always meant well and possessed a very kind spirit.
I do not require a reply to this comment.
Happy April to you very soon!
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
March 19, 2022 at 9:28 am
Tut Y
This is beautiful
March 26, 2022 at 7:30 pm
Melissa G
Thank you! ❤️
March 26, 2022 at 11:49 pm
Tut Yashar
You’re welcome, and thank you 🙏🏼❤️
April 13, 2022 at 9:39 am
Aahna Yadav
Beautiful poetry that resonates the captured sounds of your soul waiting to be set free…. Keep writing Melissa!! Was busy for a few days so couldn’t keep up with your work.
April 13, 2022 at 7:49 pm
Melissa G
Thank you for your sweet comment and encouragement, Aahna! ❤️ I’ve been feeling somewhat uninspired and your kind words are very timely and appreciated. I recently took a break from the blogging community also due to swirling energies and have a lot of reading to catch up on. Thank you again, much appreciated! 🥰
April 13, 2022 at 11:30 pm
Aahna Yadav
Yesss!! Please never underestimate yourself dear Melissa….. 😀😀
April 14, 2022 at 2:38 am
Melissa G
Thank you, Aahna. Keep shining your beautiful light too. Love and blessings ✨🌈❤️